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I do not hear your voice
Yet you speak to me
You caress me with your fine textures,
and pass me in the forest clearings
Yet still, I do not hear your voice.
©2007-2009 ~Corpse-Warrior
:iconcorpse-warrior:

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This is another I wrote a while back. It never had a name so I will call it by the number of the poem.

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:icongodlessvampire:
Really beautiful. Your work has some profound effect on me. Short, but never needing anything else, more complete than many long works I've read of others.

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:sing:

"Sing for the kid with the phone who refuses to sing."
~The Dresden Dolls

:sing:

Let's draw out dreams always...sing softly with the same lips even in the closing memories. -Yumi (translation)
:iconcorpse-warrior:
Firstly, thank you for the favourite.

Secondly, thank you. It is an honour to read those words. Thank you for your honesty.

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ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:icongodlessvampire:
You're welcome on both accounts, you deserve to hear them.

--
:sing:

"Sing for the kid with the phone who refuses to sing."
~The Dresden Dolls

:sing:

Let's draw out dreams always...sing softly with the same lips even in the closing memories. -Yumi (translation)
:iconcorpse-warrior:
:hug:

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doommetal-club [link]
Monolith Verses [link]
ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:iconrelativecosmicmusing:
:clap:
outstanding Andrew .... simply beautiful!

ps: stop 'trying' to hear the voice & you will :hug:

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this account is closing soon all new postings will be at *thatIam
:iconcorpse-warrior:
Thank you :)

By the way, that Index thing I submitted a while back, everytime I write a new poem I update it. It's best that way :)

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doommetal-club [link]
Monolith Verses [link]
ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:iconearthfaerie:
Ahh can be taken on sooo many levels :) What I get out of this is not a voice that should be heard, but a voice that is felt, understood within the soul. No matter the distance you need not talk to feel the words. I love this a lot. Reminds me of one of the worlds I live in. :)

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Wouldn't you like to know what i'm really thinking....

Like a whilting flower, I too will die. But know that in this life, I will be your rose.
:iconcorpse-warrior:
"What I get out of this is not a voice that should be heard, but a voice that is felt, understood within the soul." :faint:

Outstanding.

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doommetal-club [link]
Monolith Verses [link]
ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:iconearthfaerie:
:) I know this feeling well. For distance can never stop true love. True love is within the soul, the spirit. And when two are twin flames, their emotions travel where their voices do not.

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Wouldn't you like to know what i'm really thinking....

Like a whilting flower, I too will die. But know that in this life, I will be your rose.

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